It seems criminal that we're reading all these extracts of books and getting interested in the plots when some of these stories won't be published.
In case you hadn't guessed, Elizabeth, I found your submission intriguing and enjoyed reading it.
I hope you do well.

Joe Tucker, Leeds, UK

Intriguing plot glimpse. Perhaps short on scene description and heavy on dialog in comparison to Rowling. (If that is whom it is being held up to...)

Wes, Montreal, Canada

well done - it's very intriguing. and good luck!
having entered myself i am dreading looking here every week to see if i am lucky enough to have an extract printed.
good luck to all who entered.

Barbara, Manchester, UK

She certainly knows how to build the suspense and she's got me rivitted already. I'll be buying the book .... for me !! Ruth. Sydney

Ruth F. , Sydney, Australia

Congratulations and good luck to Elizabeth with her entry, Gemoc.

C, Dublin,