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I THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO BE easy: a few nice novels to read, a gentle cup of tea, a thoughtful decision, but when I couldn't open the office door for manuscripts the second week running, I realised that this was not going to be quite as easy as I had imagined.
To sift through the entries has been a gigantic, but hugely enjoyable task for our readers, who selected a long list of 22 novels from more than 2,000 complete manuscripts. I have reduced that to a shortlist of five for our final decision.
So how were we able to choose between an alien football team, a 13th-century boy monk, a troubled teenage girl vampire, or a cat with powers of perception? Well, actually, the books with real child appeal leap out. Most of the agony lay in the final choices between manuscripts that, while almost good enough, had insurmountable flaws of plot, style or unbelievability. Don't get me wrong - children will follow you through a time vortex, down a Victorian drain or through the back door of a spaceship if your writing is good enough, but if a character acts unemotionally or illogically, or if a writer cheats a reader by bad plotting, or, most often, if the writing just can't convey what the writer wants to say, that's when a story falls.
That's why I'm so proud of our well-crafted shortlist - and of the immense talent on show from all the entries. There is no doubt that we Brits lead the world of children's books for a reason ... we are extraordinarily eccentric, talented and deeply adept at calling up worlds of childhood that can mesmerise, enchant, grip and challenge, with passion and substance. We believe that great work for children is important and life changing - and our shortlist proves it.
The winner, to be judged by bestselling author Malorie Blackman, Times reviewer Amanda Craig, Fiona Allen from Waterstone's, young people's librarian Karen Robinson and Chicken House MD Barry Cunningham, will be announced on March 22
THE SHORTLIST
Reavers by Emily Diamand
A post apocalyptical fantasy set in a partially flooded Britain. The story
centres on a young fisher girl, orphaned when the sinister Reavers come
calling and she is at sea with her seer-like cat. Read
an extract
The Secret Life of Jemma Jones by Ann Marie Conway
A heart-warming modern day story of fractured family life: Jemma's big sister
isn't welcome in the house any more, her dad's gone AWOL and her mum refuses
to tell her why. The only thing to brighten Jemma's week is the Yellow Brick
Road Drama Club. Read
an extract
The Crowfield Feather by Pat Walsh
A dark, atmospheric, mythological fantasy set in the fourteenth century about
an orphan boy who lives in a monastery. The story builds on the discovery
that the monks have apparently buried an 'angel' in the forest. Read
an extract
Knowing Leila by Frances Field
Leila's once famous pop-star mum is going on the road again, and this summer
Leila's going with her. A modern story of teenage friendship, tricky family
relationships and moral dilemmas - set in the gorgeously colourful world of
an 'end of the pier' revival show. Read
an extract
Aliens FC by Sam Morrison and Danny Stack
A younger, comic novel about a brother and sister kidnapped in their Beckham
and Rooney football shirts by aliens. Aliens who are desperate to rescue
their failing soccer team. A terrible case of mistaken identity! Read
an extract
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Read the extracts and tell us who you think should win
I think without a shadow of a doubt that Jemma Jones should win. Good luck to the author...it's got all the ingredients of a great read!
Natalie, London,
The extracts are all too short! I'm naturally drawn to the content of The Crowfield Feather by Pat Walsh but suspect that Aliens FC would be the most fun to read.
Cate, Canberra, Australia
i think the secret life of jemma jones it the best i would like to read the whole of the book i think i will enjoy it alot !
chantelle , finchley, london
I think my favourite one is definetly The crowfield feather which just fantastic. I would love to see this book published.
Wesley Griffiths, Hartland,
I would pick the secret life of Jemma Jones as I love true life stories and all my friends love them too.
Amy, London,
The secret life of Jemma Jones sounds like it will be sad and make you forget everything else. I love that kind of book.
Lucy, London,
I liked "The Secret Life of Jemma Jones" the best because of its plain, easy writing style which drew me in and made me identify strongly with Jemma.
Sarah, Berkeley, CA, USA
I like The Secret Life of Jemma Jones. It's got all the right ingredients like mystery and a drama school and family problems. Some of the others are good as well but this is the only one I would buy probably.
Ellen, London,
Although all the shortlisted novels sound great, I particularly like the extract from The Crowfield Feather... there is something very alluring about it. Congratulations everyone!
Suzy, Algarve
Suzy, Algarve, Portugal
Congratulations to those on the shortlist, beating 2,000 others is a huge achievement.
I didn't make it but it was a lot of fun making the deadline and it was a really useful editing exersice, so thanks Chicken House :)
Steve, Chichester, UK
My vote goes to The Crowfield Feather. Atmospheric writing, a "Name of the Rose" for children. What's not to love?
Lia, Los Angeles, USA
Given that the objective was to find the next Rowling, and that Harry Potter ran to a series of several books with the same basic set of characters, do any of the above concepts have the same staying power?
:0) Congrats to everyone listed.
David R, Peterborough, Cambs
I like the Secret Life of Jemma Jones. It's like a real life book but with a mystery. Who is Crystal and what has happened to her? Also I think it is written in a way that draws you in to the story. If it wins I will definitely buy it.
Danielle, London,
Don't lose heart all those whose manuscript wasn't in the final five, and not included in the last twenty two.
JK Rowling was turned down by several publishing houses before being "Found".
JOHN GLOVER, Cheltenham, Gloucestershire
Was the competition limited to British authors? That wasn't mentioned in the contest rules yet that's what it sounds like in the announcement above. Knowing that would have saved me all the money it cost to print, bind, and mail my book overseas (I never did get my prepaid postcard back in acknowlegement). I wonder what they do with the manuscripts that didn't make it? Oh well. I'd still like to thank Chicken House and Times for having this wonderful competition and I wish good luck to the final five!
Sara Thomas, Madras,
I really enjoyed both 'The secret life of Jemma Jones' and 'The Crowfield Feather', I would buy them both on reading the extracts here.
Thank you to Chicken House and The Times for promoting children's writing as an important genre, it's always my favourite section to browse in bookstores and I don't think it gets enough press for the lesser known names and new writers. Please keep this competition going every year!
Jennifer Crawte, Poole, UK
Congratulations to the 5, how exciting this has been and still is! I too, would like to see the long list. For those who didnt make it, dont give up - there is still next year's competition!
Many thanks to all involved for giving us this chance to submit our manuscripts!
Laura Kirkwood, Northampton, UK
Just for the information of those people wanting to know the long-list. Those people on it were contacted by letter to let them know that they'd just missed out (well I was anyway). I was also provided with a 'readers report' which highlighted key sales points of the piece and which even rated it in terms of entertainment, quality and originality. I was very impressed by the detail they went into - it will be a tremendous use in approaching agents. They also said that this is intended to become an annual competition.
Thanks a lot Chicken House!
Chris Parsons, Fleetwood,
Aliens FC! Sounds like a kids' book to me!
Fifi, London,
I enjoyed reading all five extracts, and was drawn to want to read more of The Crowfield Feather!
Good luck to the now "Famous Five". It must be agonising for each of them whilst awaiting the result. Perhaps reading a good book may be a good distraction.
I too, would like to see the LIST OF"22".
JOHN GLOVER, Cheltenham, Gloucestershire
Please don't publish the longlist. Some of us don't need to have prospective agents/editors informed that we didn't make the shortlist. Surely it would be far kinder to send the longlist to everyone who is on it via email.
Bea Smith, London,
I think it would be only fair to the entrants to publish the long list, together with brief comments on why they were rejected, so that those writers on the right track can correct their work for the future.
K. Hudson
K. Hudson, Okehampton, Devon, UK
Well done to the shortlisted writers. I, too, am very intrigued to see the larger list as I entered a manuscript and would love to know if it as considered highly or not. Thanks.
Andrew, Radcliffe, UK
A look at the longer list would be a real treat and great encouragement for those who were on the right track, but would otherwise be none the wiser... I hope it is given serious consideration.
The Reavers seemed to have particularly strong writing; best of luck to the 5 selected.
MP, Oxford, UK
Congratulations, once again. A very exciting time. I have looked for the long list - will it be announced?
A, St. Helens
Aliss, St. Helens,
Please, please tell us the long-list.
Jon from London, London, UK
Congratulations to the final five, I wish each of you the best of luck.
I was wondering if it would be possible to know who made the longlist of 22?
Many thanks
Tracy, Cambridge, England