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Violence in the creative writing component of GCSE students’ coursework has fuelled concerns about the cultural influences on teenagers.
In some cases, examiners said, students produced thinly plotted but extremely disturbing content. Their report on GCSE English shows that the title The Assassin was frequently chosen by pupils in the “personal and imaginative writing” section.
Teaching associations expressed unease about the trend, particularly in light of the spate of murders and knife attacks involving young people.
Ian McNeilly, of the National Association for the Teaching of English, said that teachers should be concerned when they encountered extremely violent writing. “Any teacher presented with a script that manages, in the examiners’ words, to maintain a ‘sickening’ level of violence should be concerned,” Mr McNeilly said.
“Personally, I would give students the opportunity to write about something else. We have got enough assassins walking the streets, unfortunately, without giving them time in the classroom.”
Examiners also said that plagiarism remained a “pervasive issue”. In attempts to eradicate cheating, GCSE coursework is being cut back and in many subjects pupils will not be allowed to complete projects at home.
The report also expressed concerns at teachers giving “incomprehensibly high marks” for poor work in which students struggled with basics such as spelling, grammar and sentence structure.
Amid alarm over the number of youths caught up in violent gang culture, examiners said that the title The Assassin featured frequently in the imaginative section of coursework, worth 10 per cent of the final English mark. “This facilitated candidates to write in their own voice but within a very limiting framework, which allowed them to create and maintain a (sometimes sickeningly violent) atmosphere but provided few opportunities for character or plot development,” the Edexcel board report said. “Occasionally, there was a sense that units were awarded marks on the basis of quantity rather than quality. Some work, which was riddled with spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes, was awarded incomprehensibly high marks.”
Examiners were right to raise the issue of violence, Mr McNeilly said. “Look at some of the cultural influences, especially regarding music, that young people are exposed to - much of it espouses violence.” Staff might vary tasks set for pupils so that titles such as The Assassin were not overused.
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I must say, that although the writing may have been "sickeningly violent", the title "The Assassin" does offer itself to that sort of thing. I'm 17, and in my GCSE, I chose the question of something like "Describe a nightmare world", which was bound to be disturbing. Therefore, if one offers a title that expects to have some disturbing material, then you shouldn't complain when such disturbing material is given back to you! The fact that crimes such as murders, rape etc. are being more and more publicised means that people, even children, teenagers etc. are more exposed to it. The only successful news is bad news, so the only real news that is heavily publicised is bad news. This gives students inspiration to use in all manners of creative writing and performing arts, etc. In college and university, anyway, one has to widen one's range of writing, and one has to act parts that may have "sickeningly violent" material in it. "Sickening violence" exists, and can be used for writing
Natassia Agatowski, Portsmouth,
I've just started my GCSE course and for one piece of coursework I wrote a short story entitled 'Lucas'. It's main character is a drug smuggler, and every now and then, a hitman . I wouldn't be suprised if some of the scenes in the story would have been descibed as 'sickeningly violent' by members of the GCSE board.
I live in the suburbs and dislike rap and hip-hop music. I had to do research from the internet to make my story sound belivable. I wouldn't even throw an egg at someone's window yet apparently teachers should be concerned about me because of my creative writing, because I might be a distubed mind trying to express my emotions. If only violent people write violent stories Wibur Smith would've been locked up a long time ago.
Chistopher E Marchant, London, England
Oh My God! So now schooling of children has been sucked into the warped political-correctness campaign? What the hell do you expect when you are offering the title "The Assassin"?!
And where the hell does this assumption come from that, just because they are writing about topics like these, means that they are "disturbed" and "sick" and that they are all going to turn into little psychopaths. Um, hello, correlation confused with causation? Look at what's going on in the world. Things are different now compared to when the examiners were kids anyway. And I remember writing my creative writing coursework based on a sadistic, violent vampire and I went into much detail about how he gruesomely murdered innocent people! I was awarded an A*. Not bad for a "thinnly plotted" piece of "poor work". And nor myself, or anybody else has ever considered me deeply "disturbed". Get a grip on reality and stop taking it out on imaginative, open-minded young people.
Ashley, Bristol,
I'm only seventeen but I must admit I can see a change in the imaginations of those younger than me. Just yesterday I attended an audition at a theatre school, we were split into groups according to our ages and asked to each come up with a plot line for a sketch on the topic of dreams. I was shocked to hear what the youngest group of seven to nine year olds put together. It began innocently enough with a man and woman falling in love, getting married and having a baby, but then (and for no apparent reason), the man killed both his wife, child and then himself. Initially I was appalled but now I am quite saddened by it, are these the fairytales of the future?
Naomi, Ballymena, Northern Ireland
My son came home this week complaining that his Year 11 class has to study 'gansta rap' as part of their Eng Lit GCSE. His comment? 'Great, just 'cause we live in South London'. He feels this course module has nothing to offer educationally in terms of literature and has been included just so that teachers get a chance to raise issues and encourage critical thinking regarding violence. This would perhaps be a worthy aim but better placed in Personal and Social Education, or whatever it is called now. Both my son and I agree that this topic would have more value if it were to study rap as a whole, rather than the posturing of ganstas. He is also relieved (for once!) that there are no girls at his school as all the ones he knows would feel uncomfortable because of the disrespectful way they are represented in these lyrics.
JP, London,
If you dangle an option such as the Assassin in front of an imaginative child what do you expect? a discourse along the lines of 'the Assassin lost his job because he couldn't stand the sight of blood and after struggling with his inner demons saw the error of his ways and became a social worker' ( top marks? ).
They hardly have a good role model when they see the 6 o' clock news, who needs video nasties, the State Sponsored death and destruction is out there for all to see.
As you sow, so shall ye reap.
Simon, Leeds, U.K.
"Is such tripe likely to expand the cultural horizons of pupils who live in high crime areas? Do these poems venerate violence? It seems a fearful selection. The exam board seems to be running scared of the pupils" - Fiona Hamilton has most likely never taken time to consider the meaning of Duffy's and Armitage's work but is simply reading the words. Literature is something she cannot understand, she has read Duffy's Education For Leisure and simply believes it is a urging readers to kill. Unfortunately anybody (student/parent/teachers) who has taken time to infer the deeper complex meaning beneath the callous facade will understand that Duffy is condenming society's flaws.
Unlike journalism, literature of old and new is never flat but has as many dimensions as the reader choses to acknowledge.
sam bradshaw, london,
The set poems written by the incomprehensibly over-rated Carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage (in the AQA English anthology) espouse mindless violence. They are accompanied by illustations such as a photograph of a large, glittering knife.
Is such tripe likely to expand the cultural horizons of pupils who live in high crime areas? Do these poems venerate violence? It seems a fearful selection. The exam board seems to be running scared of the pupils.
Better give teenagers poems about smashing peoples' heads in or we may not be able to keep their interest.
It should therefore come as no surprise that pupils happily produce work that contains "sickening violence".
Jane Palmer, Reading, Berks
I am reliably informed by my daughter that her topic was not her 'choice'. The title 'The Assasin" was actually given to them by the teacher - no wonder there were many essays of a violent gendre this year, so she did her best !
We've always got James Bond for inspiration !
Let me say, I am anti-violence, and I'm very disturbed by the rise in youth crime; but it's easy to jump on the band wagon and blame the youth themselves. What about giving them non-violent essay titles to write about !!
Anna, Surrey,
On the news, you're forever hearing about the increase of gangs, murders & terrorist attacks. Films are adding more and more gore and twisted plots. Even on the seemingly innocent cartoons, you see characters yelling insults, and battling it out with each other in order to win respect from peers and such.
And of course, computer games, containing growing amounts of graphic, gore scenes, those similar to a horror movie. Except itâs worse â YOU get to experience first hand what itâs like to go around in a gang, stealing and killing.
From a very early age, children are plonked in front of the TV, and exposed to this revulsion. When it comes to creative writing, itâs almost ânaturalâ for them to write disturbing content, as they were brought up it.
But mainly expressing pent up emotions caused by social issues, domestic violence, exam stress and personal dissatisfaction. It gives a release, as the child can do and say what it wants, without having to face the consequences for real
Hannah Parcell, Shrewsbury, Shropshire
There is no doubt that many art forms - movies, music, magazines - which fill the heads of many British youngsters do contain very high levels of violence, and this input is probably reflected in the material they themselves write. However, though it is worth keeping an educational eye on such trends, I personally wouldn't worry too much that this will be translated into acceptable behaviour in the real world. We do have pockets of violent behaviour in the UK, but I would suggest that kind of minority has always been with us. Most children can tell right from wrong and the stuff that fills their heads, Tarantino movies or Rap music is, I believe, usually filtered by most youngsters into what is acceptable and what is not. I grew up in an era when it was common to read that cap guns, with which we played cowboys, were a source of concern because of the appalling signals they sent out. to gullible young minds. I don't recall reading of any of my friends later shooting up a bar!
Brian Fargher, Birmingham, United Kingdom
Long ago, when I was a teacher in a primary school, I had a boy who managed to, whatever the topic on offer, turn it into a "video nasty". I suspected he was watching inappropriate material at home. I had a conference with his mother about his work. When I pointed this obsession out to her, she treated it as a joke and saw nothing wrong with it. And there, I left it. But I felt that her lack of concern was wrong. Later, as he was bright, he went to the local independant school.
In most cases when a child's writing was of concern, or showed an awareness of the unfairness of a situation, I did flag it up to the parent concerned. What the parent did about it was up to them. Often, I felt, they did nothing or not very much.
Carlyle Braden, Croydon, U.K.